Wedding Bed Decoration

Hi, Sonia. I like the idea of \u200b\u200blearning to go back. We can follow, just in the opposite direction, because it is an idea beautiful but it says the opposite of what is meant by the poem, rather than the desire to return, spoke of the desire to forget. In fact, in the end there will be a leap from the general to the particular and I know that this jump will include a verse that says: "I never went further than to let you go." So your idea gives us the hint of a verse that I love and that belongs to fifty percent, because I've done to find what he meant, saying the opposite: "He travels to forget the roads." It clearly has to be the first of the second stanza and that if the road can not be the target to avoid rhyme. You see, a poem is like a jungle: the stronger words to eat the other.

always be traveling to your country,
yourself to a place to be another
you no longer remember,
or unwilling to return.

to forget is traveling the roads ...


Moony, I also prefer the idea of \u200b\u200bthe steps and on the streets who do not know. It's perfect and fits like you've guessed verse Sandra and me. And now that I think, why not get another character to give the reason to take the opposite Sandra and the poem and I, pick up the idea of \u200b\u200blearning to be back? Although, of course, I'm going to hold, to keep away the poem of his subject.

That leaves
learn to forget the roads
who remember their steps. Loyal
Give up the adventure of going
and the dream of return.

Although the ear tells me that "you remember your steps" could use another verse of seven syllables, sharp finish, perhaps with the voice or head, and say that these roads condemned repeat to you, to routine, lack of horizons ... I do not know, something.

As for you, Victor, for the moment not think of anything with the drug train, and even if they travel to meet is not misguided, I think that somehow has already been said. Let's see what happens to us.

Well, for now I leave there, they come to fetch me to take me to a ceremony in which I have to participate this morning. You can also start thinking about what will be the end to end makes sense. The idea is that sometimes the journey to be free can only be done if left to another-to be free to move ... I have a suspicion, however, that "I never went further than to let you go" will not be the last verse, but the penultimate.

always be traveling to your country,
yourself to a place to be another
you no longer remember,
or unwilling to return.

That leaves learn to forget the roads
who remember their steps. Loyal
, waiver
going adventure and the dream of return. (...)


I never went further than to let you go.